Floetry (freestyle poetry)  

Posted by Trufully Speakin'

Just me jammin with my fam around Christmas of '09.
the singer/piano player is my cousin Joey Legend


This entry was posted on Saturday, March 20, 2010 at 5:06 PM . You can follow any responses to this entry through the comments feed .

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Claire Dodo  

I told you the other day, and I just re-heard so I’ll type it again: you are charged! Everything from you has that quality in it. Conviction, confidence (there’s hope here, of course, that no balloons appear in the sky :p) …how do you do it? Ya, I’m not particularly fond of ellipses, but taking it away just makes the prior sentence structure look off. You don’t have to answer the question-mark either, it’s part and parcel of the whole "trying to make a point" thing. You did this really well. And he, with the vocals on the piano, has a wonderful voice. I told you yes? That the music reminds me of moonlight sonata for some reason? Now all you need is a moonlit background with an ocean and high waves. Really. :D

March 26, 2010 at 10:04 AM

You have lived up to your word, for which I am grateful. You also own my first comment, TP :)
I, personally, am inordinately fond of the ellipsis (also, I had to look that up :P) and I am -quite- aware of the rhetorical in most settings, so you're fine with me. the background I may just look into...or let you find it for me so that you can have the satisfaction of seeing your thoughts in motion, and I don't actually have to do any of the work :) in other words, we -both- win ;) thank you for your kind words, Miss Dodo.

March 28, 2010 at 12:31 AM

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